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Country Store

Uploaded on: September 3, 2008


Country Store
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SusannahGibson says,

this photo was softened using Corel X2

September 3, 2008
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racystcy27 has offered this critique,


I love both versions of this. The only thing I might be inclined to say is that one red apple in the middle I would have seen it a little sharper. My eye keeps going to it, and I wonder if it is just my poor site. But I love the composiion.



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September 3, 2008
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shrinkpictures has offered this critique,


This photo leaves me feeling like I just stepped into the store – so you have captured the emotion well.

I get the feeling that everything is leaning slightly to the left – 1-2 degrees of clockwise rotation is needed. The main focus is on the apples, and I would have really liked to see this shot from about the same height as the apples – this would have meant getting your shooting position down a little bit and maybe even very slightly to your right.

The dark conditions really worked well for this photo – the shadows are really dark and the light fall-off around the curved barrel and pot add to the olde-world feel.

I would have liked to have seen the bottom of the wooden barrel a little sharper as well, and that would have meant stepping down a little bit to give slightly more DOF. You could have done this and also lowered your shutter speed slightly as well, used the IS to compensate. The bright spot on the foreground pot and 1 of the boards in the barrel leave me wondering if this shot is very slightly over-exposed.



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September 4, 2008

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