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Country Store - Established 1868

Uploaded on: September 3, 2008


Country Store - Established 1868
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photoprof has offered this critique,


I love the composition and the country feel of this image. the subject is engaging and the diagonal line leads the eye nicely through the image. The colors appear a little flat, the reds and greens of the apples, and the variegated leaves of the plant in the center lack “pop”. These colors should be more vibrant and saturated. There is also a lack of crisp focus in the grain of wood. Given your extremely high ISO of 1600 and relatively slow shutter speed of 1/90 sec, I think all of these concerns are simply the result of a low light condition. Even with a Manual camera setting, I don’t see much that you could have done differently. Increasing shutter speed would help with sharpness but you’ve got no ISO flexibility. You may have been able to capture this with your 70mm lens using a wider aperture but I don’t know if it was available with your lens and you would have lost some depth of field. Perhaps this would have been a good time to use flash.

I might also try shooting from just a little bit lower to eliminate that shiny metal circle from the top center of the frame.



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September 3, 2008
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JuliaB says,

I agree with shrinkpictures 100% on this one.

September 5, 2008

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