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good girl

Uploaded on: September 3, 2008


good girl

gone bad

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photoprof has offered this critique,


A very nice image, well composed and well executed. Your exposure is fine although maybe just a little overexposed on your forehead but if you pulled back your exposure you would loose more of the detail in the shadows of your hair. The black semicircle under your chin is distracting and it should either not be present or more of it should be shown so that the viewer knows what it is. As it is, the ambiguity of seeing it but not understanding it creates the distraction. Another very nice self-portrait.

September 5, 2008
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JuliaB says,

Poor Ruby decided to leave us, but I’m going to comment on this anyway. Ruby does some really great self-portraits and this is one of them. Nicely composed, great tones, and the skin softening give this a nice glow.

Too bad she left, I’ll miss her work.

September 5, 2008

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